Post by arjunkanagal on Dec 24, 2014 5:03:47 GMT -5
Dear All,
The beautiful Kruti of Sundara Nandakumara by Oothukadu Venkata Kavi is one of the best classical compositions in Sanskrit. The flow of words in it are chanceless. But in the website the lyrics are in quite a disheartening state, full of errors.
Thought of bringing it to your kind attention.
The words marked in bigger fonts denote serious errors which are completely ruining the meaning of the original song.
pallavi
sundara nandakumAra surucira nava tuLasi hAra
(sundara)
anupallavi
mandara giridhara dhiRA gOvardanadhara yamunAvihAra
(sundara)
caraNam
prANanAtha rAjagOpAlA rAdhikAlOla grhANa rAjagOpAla
1
bhAsamAna kamaladaLa vikasita samAna lOcana madhumura mOcana
-(In Website - pAsamAna)
rAsagAna rasikavara surucira suvarNa cArusimhAsanam-idam grhANa
-(In Website - simhAsna-midam)
(rAja)
2
amarAdhipa sannuta padapankaja nava yauvana manmathakara
-(In Website - manmata)
sumana gOpIjana sammata sumanasAkSatayuta pAdyamidam grhANa
-(In Website - sumana sAkSatayuta)
(rAja)
3
sarvamangaLa surAsura vandita naka naka nakamaNi kinkiNi sincita
-(In Website - naga naga nagamaNi)
garvita dAnava khaNDita mangaLa kalashasthita arghyamidam grhANa
-(In Website - kalashasmita arkyam)
(rAja)
4
kamalAkara muraLidhara musalIdhara sOdara murabhIkara ati ati
-(In Website - musalItara)
ramaNeeya tava yamunA shubhajala samAyukta AcamanIyam sangrhANa
(In Website - AcamanIya)
(rAja)
5
gOpakula tilaka malayaja tilaka manOhara mOhita lOka vilOcana
shObhaneeya rAdhAmukha ramaNa sugandha manOhara dhUpamidam sangrhANa
-(In Website - shobaniya, suganddha)
(rAja)
6
nava nava pallava mallikAdi valayita vanamAlikAbharaNa mrgamada
tilaka phAla kanaka cEla nIla sarOruha tara karnadhyuti jAla
-(In Website - dikpAlaka)
lAvaNya mRdu mandahAsa vadanAmbuja ravikOTi tEjarAja
mAdhava haladhara sOdara shubhakara mangaLakara dIpamidam sangrhANa
-(In Website - halatara)
(rAja)
7
pAyasAdaya sUpa rucikaratara pAkatOka navanIta chASkulya
-(In Website - shubha, sAshkulya)
dadhinava phala citrAnna samanvita ShaDrasayuta bhuktamidam sangrhANa
(rAja)
8
gOpIjana mana ranjana madhu muraLIdhara darAdharAruNa karavita
phUgIphala samyukta nAga vallIdaLayuta tAmbUlamidam grhANa
-(In Website - bhUhi bala)
(rAja)
9
kalyANaguNa karuNAlavAla kALIya phaNa pada lOla
cANUra baka pralambaka shakaTa dhEnukAdi kula kAla
-(In Website - jANUra paga pralambaka sakaTa)
candra varNa manamOhana nava vraja sundarI gaNavilOla
vENugAna viSANa dharaNa priya gOsamUha hRdipAla
-(In Website - taraNa)
viTapa mUla navanIta nijakara dharOttama gOkulabAla
-(In Website - tarottama)
(sundara)
Kindly update the correct version in the website.
Thank you.
Arjun.
The beautiful Kruti of Sundara Nandakumara by Oothukadu Venkata Kavi is one of the best classical compositions in Sanskrit. The flow of words in it are chanceless. But in the website the lyrics are in quite a disheartening state, full of errors.
Thought of bringing it to your kind attention.
The words marked in bigger fonts denote serious errors which are completely ruining the meaning of the original song.
pallavi
sundara nandakumAra surucira nava tuLasi hAra
(sundara)
anupallavi
mandara giridhara dhiRA gOvardanadhara yamunAvihAra
(sundara)
caraNam
prANanAtha rAjagOpAlA rAdhikAlOla grhANa rAjagOpAla
1
bhAsamAna kamaladaLa vikasita samAna lOcana madhumura mOcana
-(In Website - pAsamAna)
rAsagAna rasikavara surucira suvarNa cArusimhAsanam-idam grhANa
-(In Website - simhAsna-midam)
(rAja)
2
amarAdhipa sannuta padapankaja nava yauvana manmathakara
-(In Website - manmata)
sumana gOpIjana sammata sumanasAkSatayuta pAdyamidam grhANa
-(In Website - sumana sAkSatayuta)
(rAja)
3
sarvamangaLa surAsura vandita naka naka nakamaNi kinkiNi sincita
-(In Website - naga naga nagamaNi)
garvita dAnava khaNDita mangaLa kalashasthita arghyamidam grhANa
-(In Website - kalashasmita arkyam)
(rAja)
4
kamalAkara muraLidhara musalIdhara sOdara murabhIkara ati ati
-(In Website - musalItara)
ramaNeeya tava yamunA shubhajala samAyukta AcamanIyam sangrhANa
(In Website - AcamanIya)
(rAja)
5
gOpakula tilaka malayaja tilaka manOhara mOhita lOka vilOcana
shObhaneeya rAdhAmukha ramaNa sugandha manOhara dhUpamidam sangrhANa
-(In Website - shobaniya, suganddha)
(rAja)
6
nava nava pallava mallikAdi valayita vanamAlikAbharaNa mrgamada
tilaka phAla kanaka cEla nIla sarOruha tara karnadhyuti jAla
-(In Website - dikpAlaka)
lAvaNya mRdu mandahAsa vadanAmbuja ravikOTi tEjarAja
mAdhava haladhara sOdara shubhakara mangaLakara dIpamidam sangrhANa
-(In Website - halatara)
(rAja)
7
pAyasAdaya sUpa rucikaratara pAkatOka navanIta chASkulya
-(In Website - shubha, sAshkulya)
dadhinava phala citrAnna samanvita ShaDrasayuta bhuktamidam sangrhANa
(rAja)
8
gOpIjana mana ranjana madhu muraLIdhara darAdharAruNa karavita
phUgIphala samyukta nAga vallIdaLayuta tAmbUlamidam grhANa
-(In Website - bhUhi bala)
(rAja)
9
kalyANaguNa karuNAlavAla kALIya phaNa pada lOla
cANUra baka pralambaka shakaTa dhEnukAdi kula kAla
-(In Website - jANUra paga pralambaka sakaTa)
candra varNa manamOhana nava vraja sundarI gaNavilOla
vENugAna viSANa dharaNa priya gOsamUha hRdipAla
-(In Website - taraNa)
viTapa mUla navanIta nijakara dharOttama gOkulabAla
-(In Website - tarottama)
(sundara)
Kindly update the correct version in the website.
Thank you.
Arjun.